Spelling fixes & a few cases of polishing the English (#329)

[simgrid.git] / docs / source / Deploying_your_Application.rst

diff --git a/docs/source/Deploying_your_Application.rst b/docs/source/Deploying_your_Application.rst
index 525d7e3..7c1a299 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/source/Deploying_your_Application.rst
+++ b/docs/source/Deploying_your_Application.rst
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ There is several ways to deploy the :ref:`application <application>` you want to
 study on your :ref:`simulated platform <platform>`, i.e. to specify which actor
 should be started on which host. You can do so directly in your program (as
 shown in :ref:`these examples <s4u_ex_actors>`), or using an XML deployment
-file. Unless you have a good reason, you should keep your application appart
+file. Unless you have a good reason, you should keep your application apart
 from the deployment as it will :ref:`ease your experimental campain afterward
 <howto_science>`.
 
@@ -33,20 +33,21 @@ archive for files named ``???_d.xml`` for more):
    <?xml version='1.0'?>
    <!DOCTYPE platform SYSTEM "https://simgrid.org/simgrid.dtd">
    <platform version="4.1">
-     <!-- The following starts an actor that runs the function `alice` on the given host.
-       -- It is not given any parameter.
+     <!-- The following starts an actor that runs the function `alice()` on the given host.
+       -- It is not given any parameter, so its args is empty.
        -->
      <actor host="host1" function="alice" />
 
      <!-- The following starts another actor that runs `bob()` on host2.
-       -- The argv of this actor contains "3" and "3000" on creation.
+       -- The args of this actor contains "3" and "3000" on creation.
        -->
      <actor host="host2" function="bob" />
        <argument value="3"/>
        <argument value="3000"/>
      </actor>
 
-     <!-- Carole runs on 'host3', has 1 parameter "42" in its argv and one property -->
+     <!-- Carole runs on 'host3', has 1 parameter "42" in its argv and one property. 
+       -- Use simgrid::s4u::Actor::get_property() to retrieve it.-->
      <actor host="host3" function="carol">
        <argument value="42"/>
        <prop id="SomeProp" value="SomeValue"/>