rework a bit and typo fixes

diff --git a/docs/source/platform_howtos.rst b/docs/source/platform_howtos.rst
index 1b4eebe..cd61f10 100644 (file)
--- a/docs/source/platform_howtos.rst
+++ b/docs/source/platform_howtos.rst
@@ -206,34 +206,37 @@ If host `A` sends `100kB` (a hundred kilobytes) to host `B`, one could expect
 that this communication would take `0.81` seconds to complete according to a
 simple latency-plus-size-divided-by-bandwidth model (0.01 + 8e5/1e6 = 0.81).
 However, the default TCP model of SimGrid is a bit more complex than that. It
 that this communication would take `0.81` seconds to complete according to a
 simple latency-plus-size-divided-by-bandwidth model (0.01 + 8e5/1e6 = 0.81).
 However, the default TCP model of SimGrid is a bit more complex than that. It

-accounts for three phenomena that directly impacts the simulation time even
+accounts for three phenomena that directly impact the simulation time even

 on such a simple example:
   - The size of a message at the application level (i.e., 100kB in this
 on such a simple example:
   - The size of a message at the application level (i.e., 100kB in this

-    example) is not the size of what will actually be transferred over the
-    network. To mimic the fact that TCP and IP header are added to each packet of
+    example) is not the size that will actually be transferred over the
+    network. To mimic the fact that TCP and IP headers are added to each packet of

     the original payload, the TCP model of SimGrid empirically considers that
     the original payload, the TCP model of SimGrid empirically considers that

-    `only 97% of the nominal bandwidth` are available. In other works, the
+    `only 97% of the nominal bandwidth` are available. In other words, the

     size of your message is increased by a few percents, whatever this size be.
 
   - In the real world, the TCP protocol is not able to fully exploit the
     bandwidth of a link from the emission of the first packet. To reflect this
     `slow start` phenomenon, the latency declared in the platform file is
     multiplied by `a factor of 13.01`. Here again, this is an empirically
     size of your message is increased by a few percents, whatever this size be.
 
   - In the real world, the TCP protocol is not able to fully exploit the
     bandwidth of a link from the emission of the first packet. To reflect this
     `slow start` phenomenon, the latency declared in the platform file is
     multiplied by `a factor of 13.01`. Here again, this is an empirically

-    determined value that may not correspond to every TCP implementation on
+    determined value that may not correspond to every TCP implementations on

     every networks. It can be tuned when more realistic simulated times for
     short messages are needed though.
 
   - When data is transferred from A to B, some TCP ACK messages travel in the
     opposite direction. To reflect the impact of this `cross-traffic`, SimGrid
     simulates a flow from B to A that represents an additional bandwidth
     every networks. It can be tuned when more realistic simulated times for
     short messages are needed though.
 
   - When data is transferred from A to B, some TCP ACK messages travel in the
     opposite direction. To reflect the impact of this `cross-traffic`, SimGrid
     simulates a flow from B to A that represents an additional bandwidth

-    consumption of `0.05`. The bandwidth share allocated to the flow from A to
-    B is then the available bandwidth (i.e., 97% of the nominal one) divided by
-    1.05 (i.e., the total consumption). This feature, activated by default, can be
-    disabled by adding the `--cfg=network/crosstraffic:0` flag to command line.
+    consumption of `0.05`. The route from B to A is implicity declared in the
+    platfrom file and uses the same link `link1` as if the two hosts were
+    connected through a communication bus. The bandwidth share allocated to the
+    flow from A to B is then the available bandwidth of `link1` (i.e., 97% of
+    the nominal bandwidth of 1Mb/s) divided by 1.05 (i.e., the total consumption).
+    This feature, activated by default, can be disabled by adding the
+    `--cfg=network/crosstraffic:0` flag to command line.

 
 

-As a consequence, the simulated time of a transfer of 100kB from A to B is not
-0.81 seconds but
+As a consequence, the time to transfer 100kB from A to B as simulated by the
+default TCP model of SimGrid is not 0.81 seconds but

 
 .. code-block:: python
 
 
 .. code-block:: python
 

-    0.01 * 13.01 + 800000 / ((0.97 * 1e6) / 1.05) =  0.996079 seconds
+    0.01 * 13.01 + 800000 / ((0.97 * 1e6) / 1.05) =  0.996079 seconds.